These results, although positive show some key area's we need to improve on before we produce a final cut.
Sound was one area, improving the loudness of conversation to music levels was one change we could make. Doing this would also make the narrative clearer.
To further make the plot line clearer we will add an additional scene of the doctor explaining to Destiny that Hope's treatment was unsuccessful. This will add more dramatic impact for the audience as they realise Destiny's efforts actually killed Hope.
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